I have yet to break the code in order to be able to write an essay well. In fact, this entire sophomore year, I haven't gotten higher than a C on any of my papers. There are many rules that I have not followed in the process of writing a clear and efficient essay. Most of my errors occur under the clear wording category and makes it difficult for readers to read my writing.

The majority of the time this piece fails to be exceptionally well is because of the many instances of unclear wording throughout this piece of literature. When I prove points in my writing I understand what I'm saying but I don't check to see if what I'm trying to prove is clear to the reader. In my essay titled "Values of the Future" I have many good points that can make my essay well...