but certainly in the untried seas he is no great discoverer.
One design of the Epic poets before him was to adorn
their own country, there finding their heroes and
patterns of virtue, where example, as they thought,
would have the greater influence and power over posterity;
“but this poet, says Rymer, steers a different
course; his heroes are all foreigners; he cultivates
a country that is nothing a-kin to him, and Lombardy
reaps the honour of all. Other poets chose some
action or hero so illustrious, that the name of the
poem prepared the reader, and made way for its reception;
but in this poem none can divine what great action
he intended to celebrate, nor is the reader obliged
to know whether the hero be Turk or Christian; nor
do the first lines give any light or prospect into
the design. Altho’ a poet should know all
arts and sciences, yet ought he discreetly to manage
his knowledge. He must have a judgment to select
what is noble and beautiful, and proper for the occasion.
He must by a particular chemistry, extract the essence
of things; without soiling his wit with dross or trumpery.
The sort of verse Davenant makes choice of in his
Gondibert might contribute much to the vitiating his
stile; for thereby he obliges himself to stretch every
period to the end of four lines: Thus the sense
is broken perpetually with parentheses, the words
jumbled in confusion, and darkness spread over all;
but it must be acknowledged, that Davenant had a particular
talent for the manners; his thoughts are great, and
there appears something roughly noble thro’
the whole.” This is the substance of Rymer’s
observations on Gondibert. Rymer was certainly
a scholar, and a man of discernment; and tho’
in some parts of the criticisms he is undoubtedly right,
yet in other parts he is demonstrably wrong.
He complains that Davenant has laid the scene of action
in Lombardy, which Rymer calls neglecting his own
country; but the critic should have considered, that
however well it might have pleased the poet’s
countrymen, yet as an epic poem is supposed to be
read in every nation enlightened by science, there
can no objections arise from that quarter by any but
those who were of the same country with the author.
His not making choice of a pompous name, and introducing
his poem with an exordium, is rather a beauty than
a fault; for by these means he leaves room for surprize,
which is the first excellency in any poem, and to
strike out beauties where they are not expected, has
a happy influence upon the reader. Who would
think from Milton’s introduction, that so stupendous
a work would ensue, and simple dignity is certainly
more noble, than all the efforts and colourings which
art and labour can bestow.
The ingenious and learned Mr. Blackwall, Professor of Greek in the university of Aberdeen, in his enquiry into the life and writings of Homer, censures the structure of the poem; but, at the same time pays a compliment to the abilities of the author. “It was indeed (says he) a very extraordinary project of our ingenious countryman, to write an epic poem without mixing allegory, or allowing the smallest fiction throughout the composure. It was like lopping off a man’s limb, and then putting him upon running races; tho’ it must be owned that the performance shews, with what ability he could have acquitted himself, had he been sound and entire.”


