For Mr Hardy’s poetic gift is not a late and freakish flowering. In the volume into which has been gathered all his poetical work with the exception of ’The Dynasts,’[12] are pieces bearing the date 1866 which display an astonishing mastery, not merely of technique but of the essential content of great poetry. Nor are such pieces exceptional. Granted that Mr Hardy has retained only the finest of his early poetry, still there are a dozen poems of 1866-7 which belong either entirely or in part to the category of major poetry. Take, for instance, ’Neutral Tones’:—
’We stood by a pond that winter
day,
And the sun was white, as though chidden
of God,
And a few leaves lay on the starving sod;
—They had fallen
from an ash, and were gray.
’Your eyes on me were as eyes that
rove
Over tedious riddles long ago;
And some winds played between us to and
fro
On which lost the more by
our love.
’The smile on your mouth was the
deadest thing
Alive enough to have strength to die;
And a grin of bitterness swept thereby
Like an ominous bird a-wing....
’Since then keen lessons that love
deceives
And wrings with wrong, have shaped to
me
Your face, and the God-curst sun, and
a tree
And a pond edged with grayish
leaves.’
[Footnote 12: Collected.
Poems of Thomas Hardy. Vol. I.
(Macmillan.)]
That was written in 1867. The date of Desperate Remedies, Mr Hardy’s first novel, was 1871. Desperate Remedies may have been written some years before. It makes no difference to the astonishing contrast between the immaturity of the novel and the maturity of the poem. It is surely impossible in the face of such a juxtaposition then to deny that Mr Hardy’s poetry exists in its own individual right, and not as a curious simulacrum of his prose.
These early poems have other points of deep interest, of which one of the chief is in a sense technical. One can trace a quite definite influence of Shakespeare’s sonnets in his language and imagery. The four sonnets, ‘She to Him’ (1866), are full of echoes, as:—
’Numb as a vane that cankers on
its point
True to the wind that kissed ere canker
came.’
or this from another sonnet of the same year:—
’As common chests encasing wares
of price
Are borne with tenderness through halls
of state.’
Yet no one reading the sonnets of these years can fail to mark the impress of an individual personality. The effect is, at times, curious and impressive in the extreme. We almost feel that Mr Hardy is bringing some physical compulsion to bear on Shakespeare and forcing him to say something that he does not want to say. Of course, it is merely a curious tweak of the fancy; but there comes to us in such lines as the following an insistent vision of two youths of an age the one masterful, the other indulgent, and carrying out his companion’s firm suggestion:—


