of Art’ and ‘A Dream of Fair Women’
with the poems as they are presented in 1853.
Poets do not always improve their verses by revision,
as all students of Wordsworth’s text could abundantly
illustrate; but it may be doubted whether, in these
poems at least, Tennyson ever made a single alteration
which was not for the better. Fitzgerald, indeed,
contended that in some cases, particularly in ‘The
Miller’s Daughter’, Tennyson would have
done well to let the first reading stand, but few critics
would agree with him in the instances he gives.
We may perhaps regret the sacrifice of such a stanza
as this—
Each coltsfoot down the grassy bent, Whose round leaves
hold the gathered shower, Each quaintly folded cuckoo
pint, And silver-paly cuckoo flower.
II
Tennyson’s genius was slow in maturing.
The poems contributed by him to the volume of 1827,
‘Poems by Two Brothers’, are not without
some slight promise, but are very far from indicating
extraordinary powers. A great advance is discernible
in ‘Timbuctoo’, but that Matthew Arnold
should have discovered in it the germ of Tennyson’s
future powers is probably to be attributed to the
youth of the critic. Tennyson was in his twenty-second
year when the ‘Poems Chiefly Lyrical’ appeared,
and what strikes us in these poems is certainly not
what Arthur Hallam saw in them: much rather what
Coleridge and Wilson discerned in them. They are
the poems of a fragile and somewhat morbid young man
in whose temper we seem to see a touch of Hamlet,
a touch of Romeo and, more healthily, a touch of Mercutio.
Their most promising characteristic is the versatility
displayed. Thus we find ‘Mariana’
side by side with the ‘Supposed Confessions’,
the ‘Ode to Memory’ with Greek[’oi
rheontes’], ‘The Ballad of Oriana’
with ‘The Dying Swan’, ’Recollections
of The Arabian Nights’ with ‘The Poet’.
Their worst fault is affectation. Perhaps the
utmost that can be said for them is that they display
a fine but somewhat thin vein of original genius,
after deducing what they owe to Coleridge, to Keats
and to other poets. This is seen in the magical
touches of description, in the exquisite felicity of
expression and rhythm which frequently mark them,
in the pathos and power of such a poem as ‘Oriana’,
in the pathos and charm of such poems as ‘Mariana’
and ‘A Dirge’, in the rich and almost
gorgeous fancy displayed in ’The Recollections’.
The poems of 1833 are much more ambitious and strike
deeper notes. Here comes in for the first time
that Greek[spondai_otaes’], that high seriousness
which is one of Tennyson’s chief characteristics—we
see it in ‘The Palace of Art’, in ‘’none’
and in the verses ‘To J. S.’ But in
intrinsic merit the poems were no advance on their
predecessors, for the execution was not equal to the
design. The best, such as ‘’none’,
’A Dream of Fair Women’, ‘The Palace
of Art’, ’The Lady of Shalott’—I
am speaking of course of these poems in their first
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